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Lily and James again:D
well,attempment number 237654 to get Lily Evans.
Lily just has to pass her exams:roll:

and I'm not sure how their "conversation" sounds in English..I bet there are mistakes:iconiamstupidplz:

and..I KNOW that James's pose is strange.
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~fabala-the-artist Dec 20, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
bahaha i like james's pose. it looks like he's trying to look suave and impressive, but comes across as a bit goofy. which is adorable. i love his tie too ;P
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=artisteri Dec 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think it's a great job, and the english is perfect :)
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~Chashirskiy Dec 20, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Они тебя еще не запутали с этим 'maybe/probably/perhaps'? :D По мне, так 'maybe' идеальный вариант.)))))
У Лили замечательные волосы, а Джеймс как всегда в вальяжной, полу расслабленной позе. :aww:
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~Dinoralp Dec 20, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
мммм симпатяги)))секси шмекси Джеймс xDDD
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~MaVoix Dec 20, 2010  Student General Artist
The conversation sounds fine. Just, normally, instead of 'someone's' 'your' would be said when talking directly to someone like that. So it's "Do I look like I need your help?". But, both how you have it and like that work perfectly. James' question is a tad awkward to me, but it communicates, which is all that matters, really. I'm just used to hearing "Perhaps you need some help?" rather than "Maybe you need some help?". Perhaps and maybe are pretty similar when used like tha - so, it doesn't really matter. But, really, your English is just fine. Much better than my French. XD

Anyways, I love this drawing. <3
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~xoamazingjesso Dec 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
English isn't your main language?

What is?! This interests me :)
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*viria13 Dec 20, 2010  Student Digital Artist
russian
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~xoamazingjesso Dec 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
ooh
That's so cool :)

When I get to High school, that's what my mom wants me to take for a language!
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Aw, they are so cute! If you wanted to make James' dialog sound more natural, you could change 'probably' to 'maybe', or take 'probably' out all together. But it is still very good! Lily's hair looks so pretty, and I love how James is wearing his uniform (again) ;P
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*viria13 Dec 20, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I am glad you liked it:aww:
but...could you explain what the difference between maybe and probably?:O
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