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horror story time by viria13 horror story time by viria13
guess who has finally finished that comic!:D

This is by far the most time-consuming thing I've EVER done in my life. And I am so freaking proud of myself right now, I might explode.

So, these are the original characters from the story me and my friend are working on. There are Rikka, the girl who is telling the story *who is based on me*, Asha, the girl who is based on my friend and Lik, who is.. well, who is original:aww:
The story is written by my friend, *though a little bit based on 'avatarded' events of what happened to me* But still, writing belongs to Masha, I just translated:3

I guess there are pretty many mistakes here, but I really tried my best with English…Hope it is understandable.

Haha, I know the story might not be actually scary, but there's one thing that actually freaked me out when I drew it. I was like omg faster faster faster omg don't look in her eyes scroll scroll must draw something else, haha

So, if you actually did read the whole thing, there’s one thing my friend didn’t notice at first, so I mention it here. scaarryyy Chi is standing behind Rikka (me) on one of the ‘flashback’ panels.

I do really hope you'll like this :aww:
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Dreamer-of-Magic Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014   General Artist
Cool story :D
QueenLucySusan Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Awesome and scary!
Gothalla123 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay... why did that creep me out, I went to hide behind my pillow, every time I saw Chi And in that one panel... the one with Chi standing behind Rikka... I couldn't wait to scroll down further and get away from her... and now that I see that it freaked you out to I'm even more terrified *Hides behind teddy bear*
Books-are-my-dreams Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Student General Artist
GAH!!! You freaked me out with Chi looking over your shoulder... Scary...
And I LAUGHED during Van Helsing!
LonelyBlackWolf Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
what are the animals that are laying on the ground?and the one on the guy's shoulder?
mangasockattack Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Creepy~ Very good job! I saw her...that was CREEPY CHI!!
postrachwampirow Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
wow! I love your works! They are always so inspiring...
IzzieAlice Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
Amazing artwork! :D My heart did a little somersault when I saw Insane Chi standing behind her.

Note to self: do not look at this picture while listening to The Woman in Black soundtrack.
mcbriderulz Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i didnt notice Chi standing behind her until you pointed it out, but then once i saw it was 'OMG scary'
omgwtfgabs Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The story was really, really good, Viria! My friend had to point out Chi to me cause she was showing me this comic when she was over. The expressions are well-done btw! It's like something out of Disney. However, I do have a critique for you.

The next time you want to do another comic, your panels and bubbles need to be more organized. The story is interesting, but trying to figure out which panel/bubble comes next is frustrating and a turn-off. Not only that, but I notice that you don't just stick with squares and rectangles, you're making your own shapes to make room for another panel, which actually makes the panels look inconsistent.

Oh, and for some text bubble 101, try to make sure the bubble tails are coming from their mouths. For example, look at the second panel, the tail of the bubble is coming from her eye rather than her mouth. You should also try making sure the bubbles stay in the panels rather than just floating off, and try to make the bubbles/font smaller in order to make more room for the background the characters.

I really have nothing to say on the art. Your lighting is good, Chi looks creepy as hell, and I like how the firebender girl is firebending in order to provide visuals for her storytelling, very awesome.
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