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horror story time by viria13 horror story time by viria13
guess who has finally finished that comic!:D

This is by far the most time-consuming thing I've EVER done in my life. And I am so freaking proud of myself right now, I might explode.

So, these are the original characters from the story me and my friend are working on. There are Rikka, the girl who is telling the story *who is based on me*, Asha, the girl who is based on my friend and Lik, who is.. well, who is original:aww:
The story is written by my friend, *though a little bit based on 'avatarded' events of what happened to me* But still, writing belongs to Masha, I just translated:3

I guess there are pretty many mistakes here, but I really tried my best with English…Hope it is understandable.

Haha, I know the story might not be actually scary, but there's one thing that actually freaked me out when I drew it. I was like omg faster faster faster omg don't look in her eyes scroll scroll must draw something else, haha

So, if you actually did read the whole thing, there’s one thing my friend didn’t notice at first, so I mention it here. scaarryyy Chi is standing behind Rikka (me) on one of the ‘flashback’ panels.

I do really hope you'll like this :aww:
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Star-Nebula-539 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my gods!
When I scroll back up, I saw Insane Chi just like staring out of the shadows...
Eatable01 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"So, if you actually did read the whole thing, there’s one thing my friend didn’t notice at first, so I mention it here. scaarryyy Chi is standing behind Rikka (me) on one of the ‘flashback’ panels."

I did noticed :D
Dreamer-of-Magic Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014   General Artist
Cool story :D
QueenLucySusan Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Awesome and scary!
Gothalla123 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay... why did that creep me out, I went to hide behind my pillow, every time I saw Chi And in that one panel... the one with Chi standing behind Rikka... I couldn't wait to scroll down further and get away from her... and now that I see that it freaked you out to I'm even more terrified *Hides behind teddy bear*
Books-are-my-dreams Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Student General Artist
GAH!!! You freaked me out with Chi looking over your shoulder... Scary...
And I LAUGHED during Van Helsing!
LonelyBlackWolf Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
what are the animals that are laying on the ground?and the one on the guy's shoulder?
mangasockattack Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Creepy~ Very good job! I saw her...that was CREEPY CHI!!
postrachwampirow Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
wow! I love your works! They are always so inspiring...
IzzieAlice Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
Amazing artwork! :D My heart did a little somersault when I saw Insane Chi standing behind her.

Note to self: do not look at this picture while listening to The Woman in Black soundtrack.
mcbriderulz Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i didnt notice Chi standing behind her until you pointed it out, but then once i saw it was 'OMG scary'
omgwtfgabs Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The story was really, really good, Viria! My friend had to point out Chi to me cause she was showing me this comic when she was over. The expressions are well-done btw! It's like something out of Disney. However, I do have a critique for you.

The next time you want to do another comic, your panels and bubbles need to be more organized. The story is interesting, but trying to figure out which panel/bubble comes next is frustrating and a turn-off. Not only that, but I notice that you don't just stick with squares and rectangles, you're making your own shapes to make room for another panel, which actually makes the panels look inconsistent.

Oh, and for some text bubble 101, try to make sure the bubble tails are coming from their mouths. For example, look at the second panel, the tail of the bubble is coming from her eye rather than her mouth. You should also try making sure the bubbles stay in the panels rather than just floating off, and try to make the bubbles/font smaller in order to make more room for the background the characters.

I really have nothing to say on the art. Your lighting is good, Chi looks creepy as hell, and I like how the firebender girl is firebending in order to provide visuals for her storytelling, very awesome.
devidoggy87 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I shall now sleep with the lights on That panel is scary
ooOheARtbReaKOoo Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah that actually scared me. I am trying not to look behind me. Fug I am not gonna be able to sleep tonight.
yukime-kun Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh god i didn't notice chi was standing next to her and that totally freaked me out when you pointed it out and i went to look again ;n;

Note to self: must not read scary stuff at 5 am
Ahhh! I LOVE your work! You never cease to amaze me with your talent. Seriously, your ATLA art is by far the best I have ever seen, and your OC's are awesome :) I would love see more of these characters in future!
Princess-Seraphim Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I can see God that is SCARY... 0_e
ghost326106 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Klonder Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
I can't feel my heartbeat anymore...
mac-theteenwolf Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
my suggestion: let's go to the tea shop and BUST SOME GHOSTS!!!!! who's with me? one, just me huh?...
IHeartTwins7392 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
I'll go! And I'll drag my friends with us!
CelestialTeez Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Aeromona24 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
AH! You know I should really learn not to, but you mentioned scary Chi standing behind Rikka so I HAD to go back and look and GAH! That panel freaks me out so bad now. SUCH AN AWESOME STORY!! :D
PHantomDragon-56 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012   General Artist
I really like your artwork! I enjoyed reading the comic, and it creeped me out a little, but when you mentioned about 'Insane Chi' being behind Rikka in one of the panels, I scrolled up to look. And my heart literally skipped a beat when I saw her there. Somehow I completely missed her the first go. Now my heart's pounding. XD

Bravo, the art and story really are great!
InuLogical Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
I like how you experimented more with the facial expressions and I've got to say, your characters were really expressive this time. Although, with the more surprised or horrified faces they seem... forced or unnatural. I think you've stated before that you were have trouble making your characters more expressive and I think you came a long way from only subtle emotion on the face that seemed slightly cookie-cutter.
But I think especially with your style of art it would be harder because you're drawing relatively cartoons in a realistic manner while still retaining that structured cartoon style.
Katy-L-Wood Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student General Artist
I love how you had her bending the fire into shapes to tell the story, it was really cool.
Haseo-Ani-Waya Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, so that was,/i> a ghost behind her. Cool.
authorgirl1124 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
when I saw Chi :iconcannotevenplz: OMG!!!

This is really cool, I really enjoyed it! Great job!
Kaiyaru Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
rrrr eerie D:
nice story
gabby5455 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
"I'm not seeing any Chi here. I've looked here and here and...HOLY SH-"
supershift001 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
omg wen i saw chi...
before seeing her :D dis is awesome!!
notices her: --flinches so hard dat i crrack da computer screen-- holy!!
Cherushii13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student
this is really good! but when I noticed Chi behind Rikka ... O.o
KittyFace1717 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice story!
ChikaraRyoku Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
that was scary
really well drawn and written
revala Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This was great! Super well-done and sooo entertaining to read
Karly-Berri142 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
omg when I noticed Chi behind Rikka I seriously jumped in fear! It's scared the shit out of me D:
anyways this is so well done I specially love the lighting :la:
9artsy28 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
I saw Chi and I screamed!!!! its not fun to notice things like that in a pitch black room in the middle of thee night XC
kitkithidan27 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg, I saw Chi DX that freaked me out! good job
LinBird Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
Really creepy, and really good! I love it. You should be proud of yourself :nod:
Awesome Job!
fatchy131 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012
omg i scrolled up to look for scary chi now im scared to blink!
Free-Gemini Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student
OMG, this is sooo good! I was so scared at the end, I had goose bumbs all over my arms!
Great atmosphere ^^
DoctorHelvin Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist
Oh God... I've read it last evening, and i was all alone in the dark with my computer on my knees and... when you noticed Chi standing behind Rikka, i was just terrified ! Thanx Viria -_-
But great job by the way ;)
Pledgling Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Dude, this was awesome. I got a bit scared as well and when I finished, I went down to the bottom and read the part about scary Chi. I look back up and WHAM she's right there. I seriously jumped. I SWEAR she wasn't there before! I SWEAR.
floating-cranes-726 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student
whoa that actually kinda freaked me out o.o but great comic! i love rikka :)
LovableLuma Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is awesome! And omg I've noticed scary chi standing behind Rikka! D: Damn! That scared me!
TonyDennison Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
Beautiful piece!
soliander Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was just AMAZING.
That was awesome.
vicasocema Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
Ohhh my goodness!! I dind't see scary Chi before i read the description....God, that WAS Scary!!. You're really amazing!!!
msChicken Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Your drawings are always very nice, so I figured before reading it that it would be scary. I opened some other windows on the computer with pictures of unicorns and rainbows, and every time I went "OMG Chi's going to be behind her in this panel" i clicked on one of the pictures of a unicorn, took a deep breath and then kept on reading. It worked very well.
The comic was really good, even better than expected!
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