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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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And I LAUGHED during Van Helsing!
Note to self: do not look at this picture while listening to The Woman in Black soundtrack.
The next time you want to do another comic, your panels and bubbles need to be more organized. The story is interesting, but trying to figure out which panel/bubble comes next is frustrating and a turn-off. Not only that, but I notice that you don't just stick with squares and rectangles, you're making your own shapes to make room for another panel, which actually makes the panels look inconsistent.
Oh, and for some text bubble 101, try to make sure the bubble tails are coming from their mouths. For example, look at the second panel, the tail of the bubble is coming from her eye rather than her mouth. You should also try making sure the bubbles stay in the panels rather than just floating off, and try to make the bubbles/font smaller in order to make more room for the background the characters.
I really have nothing to say on the art. Your lighting is good, Chi looks creepy as hell, and I like how the firebender girl is firebending in order to provide visuals for her storytelling, very awesome.
Note to self: must not read scary stuff at 5 am