ummm,well that's not everything though. haha,SAI didn't let me do the canvas bigger than 10000 pixels. Anyway...someone on tumblr asked me if I am going to make another dump soon,so I just wanted to submit it.
the portrait of the girl in the middle... whats with that? It looks like you put in some effort and portrayed her really beautiful and lovely... but you're not friends and she doesnt sound too enthusiastic?
Your vision of Fred is fine as it is your drawing but just so you know there are black children that have red hair and freckles. I dated someone who had red heads on both his maternal and paternal sides of his family and he was very ginger with freckles. In his immediate family only him and his mother had the red hair and freckles whereas his father, brother and sister were dark skinned and had dark hair.
Actually my cousin Lisa is married (she's like 20 years older than me) to a Polynesian and she's super white and their daughter is brown like her dad but their son is white like his mom so Fred doesn't actually have to be black at all it's completely possible he's ginger and freckly