Two minutes 'til Potions class

Well it's been a while since I was waiting for doing a critique of your work, and you offered me such a wonderful thing.
I may not be not very objective because you are obviously the one who draw this four the most beautifully on DA x)
Never mind, here it goes.
Firstly I can truly say that the color of this work is really shiny, and we can, thanks to it, feel the "playing atmosphere" of the group. It's really agreeable to watch because of this, it's like we were with them, in the common room of Gryffindors.
Now character by character:
James:
-Hairs are perfect, and the face he's doing is just hilarious, as if he was trying to watch through Sirius's mind. Plus, the posture of his legs is excellent, it gives a true energy to him.
No doubt you totally got him in your mind.
Peter:
-Nice gaze you gave him, a real "i'mscaredtobecaught" gaze at James' cards. (Or as I could also say the "waitwhatdoeshehaveinhishand?" gaze.)
But, in my opinion, Peter is definitely not looking that good. Even if you don't wanna ruin the picture with him, I think seriously, he may be a bit more fatty or greasy-haired kind of guy.
Remus:
-The awesomeness of the face you have given him is undefinable. But I may say that his stare is a bit empty, even if he's a werewolf and that his nights are short because of this, I think his stare is and will ever be more communicative.
Sirius:
-There's nothing to be told about him. Perfect, only word that comes to my mind right now. But I think the chair has something weird. Like if it was going to break, or I dunno, but I've remarked it almost directly.

More generally, perspective is awesome, The table is great, and the carpet as well.

I've gave you Five stars at vision because:
-Nothing more to tell, just exceptionally good looking and agreeable to watch and search for details.

I've gave you (only) Four point Five stars at Originality because:
-The characters are not yours, they came from JK Rowling's mind, and that's the only thing why I gave you this rating.

I gave you five stars for your Technique:
-Because it's unique and brilliant, keep working on it to make it even better than better.

I gave you five stars as for the Impact it gaves, because:
-With the title we understand directly what it is supposed to be, and what the marauders are supposed to do.


As a general thing I would say:
Keep up the good work, and never ever stop to draw.