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Two minutes 'til Potions class by viria13 Two minutes 'til Potions class by viria13
thanks watchers for suggesting how to name this:aww:
livestream I did today.
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anyway,marauders having some fun before their classes:D


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~NeriSiren suggested a conversation between them and I think it's almost perfect so here it is:3

James: "I seriously don't get what Evans sees in Snivellus. How the hell do I compete with...with that?"
Sirius: "Stop showering for a couple weeks. Maybe she likes running her fingers through greasy hair."
James: "Eugh! Shut up!"
Remus: "You could try talking to her.
James: "I tried that..."
Remus: I mean without mentioning your 'brilliant Quidditch skills' for once."
Peter: "Uh, guys? We've got two minutes 'till Potions..."
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Well it's been a while since I was waiting for doing a critique of your work, and you offered me such a wonderful thing.
I may not be not very objective because you are obviously the one who draw this four the most beautifully on DA x)
Never mind, here it goes.
Firstly I can truly say that the color of this work is really shiny, and we can, thanks to it, feel the "playing atmosphere" of the group. It's really agreeable to watch because of this, it's like we were with them, in the common room of Gryffindors.
Now character by character:
James:
-Hairs are perfect, and the face he's doing is just hilarious, as if he was trying to watch through Sirius's mind. Plus, the posture of his legs is excellent, it gives a true energy to him.
No doubt you totally got him in your mind.
Peter:
-Nice gaze you gave him, a real "i'mscaredtobecaught" gaze at James' cards. (Or as I could also say the "waitwhatdoeshehaveinhishand?" gaze.)
But, in my opinion, Peter is definitely not looking that good. Even if you don't wanna ruin the picture with him, I think seriously, he may be a bit more fatty or greasy-haired kind of guy.
Remus:
-The awesomeness of the face you have given him is undefinable. But I may say that his stare is a bit empty, even if he's a werewolf and that his nights are short because of this, I think his stare is and will ever be more communicative.
Sirius:
-There's nothing to be told about him. Perfect, only word that comes to my mind right now. But I think the chair has something weird. Like if it was going to break, or I dunno, but I've remarked it almost directly.

More generally, perspective is awesome, The table is great, and the carpet as well.

I've gave you Five stars at vision because:
-Nothing more to tell, just exceptionally good looking and agreeable to watch and search for details.

I've gave you (only) Four point Five stars at Originality because:
-The characters are not yours, they came from JK Rowling's mind, and that's the only thing why I gave you this rating.

I gave you five stars for your Technique:
-Because it's unique and brilliant, keep working on it to make it even better than better.

I gave you five stars as for the Impact it gaves, because:
-With the title we understand directly what it is supposed to be, and what the marauders are supposed to do.


As a general thing I would say:
Keep up the good work, and never ever stop to draw.
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Charmed100 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
Lol James' face is the best
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campHBHogwartsfan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist
oh my gawd, Viria how do you draw the marauders so good? You capture their personalities so well.
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bkworm5 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sirius = Me when I play card's and am winning, so basically, me when I play cards
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Clutzy101 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the conversation you captured them just right!
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ifired Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Student Writer
For some reason I can picture them playing Magic The Gathering
Sirius would be Green-Red
James Blue-White
Remus Green-White
and Peter Black-Red
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Chibi-Moony-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, crap. Now I can too.... Although I think Remus is more of a Blue magic person than James....
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ifired Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Hmm, more Red-White Boros for James then?
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Chibi-Moony-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes. And maybe Remus would be Green-Blue?
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ifired Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Or Red-Green, Inistrad *wink*
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Chibi-Moony-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh boy..... Okay, this is what I think:

Remus: Blue-Green (Simic) or Blue-Red (Izzet) MAYBE Blue-Black (Dimir)?
James:White-Red (Boros), Black-Red (Rakdos) And maybe Blue-Red (Izzet)
Sirius: Black-White (Orzhov), Black-Red (Rakdos) or perhaps Red-White (Boros)
Peter: Red-Green (Gruul) or Black-Green (Golgari)

Basically, in my point of view (I'm new to the game, I don't know too much) no Sylesnia or Azorius for the Marauders.
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