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Two minutes 'til Potions class by viria13 Two minutes 'til Potions class by viria13
thanks watchers for suggesting how to name this:aww:
livestream I did today.
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anyway,marauders having some fun before their classes:D


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~NeriSiren suggested a conversation between them and I think it's almost perfect so here it is:3

James: "I seriously don't get what Evans sees in Snivellus. How the hell do I compete with...with that?"
Sirius: "Stop showering for a couple weeks. Maybe she likes running her fingers through greasy hair."
James: "Eugh! Shut up!"
Remus: "You could try talking to her.
James: "I tried that..."
Remus: I mean without mentioning your 'brilliant Quidditch skills' for once."
Peter: "Uh, guys? We've got two minutes 'till Potions..."
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:iconmokaaii:
Well it's been a while since I was waiting for doing a critique of your work, and you offered me such a wonderful thing.
I may not be not very objective because you are obviously the one who draw this four the most beautifully on DA x)
Never mind, here it goes.
Firstly I can truly say that the color of this work is really shiny, and we can, thanks to it, feel the "playing atmosphere" of the group. It's really agreeable to watch because of this, it's like we were with them, in the common room of Gryffindors.
Now character by character:
James:
-Hairs are perfect, and the face he's doing is just hilarious, as if he was trying to watch through Sirius's mind. Plus, the posture of his legs is excellent, it gives a true energy to him.
No doubt you totally got him in your mind.
Peter:
-Nice gaze you gave him, a real "i'mscaredtobecaught" gaze at James' cards. (Or as I could also say the "waitwhatdoeshehaveinhishand?" gaze.)
But, in my opinion, Peter is definitely not looking that good. Even if you don't wanna ruin the picture with him, I think seriously, he may be a bit more fatty or greasy-haired kind of guy.
Remus:
-The awesomeness of the face you have given him is undefinable. But I may say that his stare is a bit empty, even if he's a werewolf and that his nights are short because of this, I think his stare is and will ever be more communicative.
Sirius:
-There's nothing to be told about him. Perfect, only word that comes to my mind right now. But I think the chair has something weird. Like if it was going to break, or I dunno, but I've remarked it almost directly.

More generally, perspective is awesome, The table is great, and the carpet as well.

I've gave you Five stars at vision because:
-Nothing more to tell, just exceptionally good looking and agreeable to watch and search for details.

I've gave you (only) Four point Five stars at Originality because:
-The characters are not yours, they came from JK Rowling's mind, and that's the only thing why I gave you this rating.

I gave you five stars for your Technique:
-Because it's unique and brilliant, keep working on it to make it even better than better.

I gave you five stars as for the Impact it gaves, because:
-With the title we understand directly what it is supposed to be, and what the marauders are supposed to do.


As a general thing I would say:
Keep up the good work, and never ever stop to draw.
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GoGryffindor Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Your Sirius is just like I pictured him. (Totally and completely hot.)
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Charmed100 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
Lol James' face is the best
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campHBHogwartsfan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist
oh my gawd, Viria how do you draw the marauders so good? You capture their personalities so well.
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bkworm5 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sirius = Me when I play card's and am winning, so basically, me when I play cards
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Clutzy101 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the conversation you captured them just right!
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:iconifired:
ifired Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Student Writer
For some reason I can picture them playing Magic The Gathering
Sirius would be Green-Red
James Blue-White
Remus Green-White
and Peter Black-Red
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Chibi-Moony-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, crap. Now I can too.... Although I think Remus is more of a Blue magic person than James....
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ifired Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Hmm, more Red-White Boros for James then?
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:iconchibi-moony-chan:
Chibi-Moony-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes. And maybe Remus would be Green-Blue?
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:iconifired:
ifired Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Or Red-Green, Inistrad *wink*
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:iconchibi-moony-chan:
Chibi-Moony-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh boy..... Okay, this is what I think:

Remus: Blue-Green (Simic) or Blue-Red (Izzet) MAYBE Blue-Black (Dimir)?
James:White-Red (Boros), Black-Red (Rakdos) And maybe Blue-Red (Izzet)
Sirius: Black-White (Orzhov), Black-Red (Rakdos) or perhaps Red-White (Boros)
Peter: Red-Green (Gruul) or Black-Green (Golgari)

Basically, in my point of view (I'm new to the game, I don't know too much) no Sylesnia or Azorius for the Marauders.
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ifired Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student Writer
Remus would be Simic with a hint of Azorius as he is a rightous person, yes, but Izzet or Dimir, not at all.
James quite right with Boros with a little hint of Azorius and a splash of Rakdos
Sirius would be more Orzhov with splash of Rakdos
Peter would be Golgari, the little Slitherhead
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Chibi-Moony-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Agreed. They may have been the cool guys, but I think they might've also been nerds ;)
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Nemila Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
I love the conversation - and their facial expressions! Good job!
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Tenshinaki Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
hahaa can totally see this happening!! :D i wish there was a mini series about the marauders T-T it would be epic!!! haha :D the adventures of the marauders! i can see it now!
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VictoryJane Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Oh Remus and his chocolate :D
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BulletsEmbrace Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
This is perfect.
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essie7198 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love how Peter is looking at James' cards ;D
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ObsessedbySherlock Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
... Remus' ponytail... :horny:
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Marspaw Featured By Owner May 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
Hahaha! This is so cool, i wish i could draw this well! <3
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:iconpadfoot1234:
padfoot1234 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
love this
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:iconmayyuo:
Mayyuo Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
YOUR SIRIUS IS HOT.
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:iconluuky:
Luuky Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist
i just have to love your sirius...... O.o ♥♥♥
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Anyapink Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I luv this <3
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:iconanyapink:
Anyapink Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I LUV THIS!
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faith8hope8love Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
great job!
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xxmaraudermoonyxx Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011
This has probably the hottest version of Sirius I have ever seen! :D xx
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:iconpandorasdarkdreamer:
PandorasDarkDreamer Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like James' face... it's cool
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izclark Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
ah remus :)
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sarahbelllum Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
This is really, really nice!
However, you may want to have look at the proportions on Sirius and James. They're quite a bit skewed. On James, his right arm is a tad stubby and his legs are minimal versus the size of his torso, as is the case of Sirius. Or perhaps it's just that the heads are too large. This can happen if you don't begin the drawing with the torso. Working your way down from the head typically results in a medium body and legs that are awkwardly sized. Sorry about the undesired critique. Such a wonderful piece!
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Vulpix-chan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I assume they're playing Exploding Snap?
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KilloxXMiika Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Heehee. Sirius looks like he's about to fall out of his chair there |D
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sha1k Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011
:)
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Tangledfan77 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Sirius looks like he has this game in the bag
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PunkeeslawP Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
hahaha. I like this! (and I make me repetitive) ahahaha. For the first time, you know, no reading you saying about the art, I think Sirius is taking with the face of James, perhaps because he lost or, more likely, something bout Lily... I really chose the second option! ;D And the conversation between them is only, as they say?, aaah, the icing on the cake - for those who lile cherry...
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PunkeeslawP Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
Sorry for the same thing twice, is not my intention. :c
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PunkeeslawP Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
hahaha. I like this! (and I make me repetitive) ahahaha. For the first time, you know, no reading you saying about the art, I think Sirius is taking with the face of James, perhaps because he lost or, more likely, something bout Lily... I really chose the second option! ;D And the conversation between them is only, as they say?, aaah, the icing on the cake - for those who lile cherry...
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happylemons Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011
Its official..your drawings have made me fall passionately in love with Sirius Black..
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:iconboffiexd:
BoffieXD Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I absolutely LOVE your take one Sirius!!! :D
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jbwarner86 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011
That conversation is a perfect fit for this truly excellent scene!
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:iconlittlemissz:
littlemissz Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
Sirius looks incredible, EXACTLY how I imagined him, his expression and everything so-perfect!!
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:iconintricatedance:
IntricateDance Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
What's that peice of paper on the table say...?
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LostElvenQueen Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love your portrayal of the Marauders! It's absolutely perfect! And your art is making me fall even more in love with Sirius!
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Oracle1939 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
The expression on Sirius's face is perfect!!! i love the conversation it's all Brilliant :D
*brilliant said with british acccent*
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KanzenCM Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Filmographer
LOVE SIRIUS!!!
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Zaptrap105 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011
you gotta love Sirius XD

love the drawing, love the description even more!
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ImAPureblood Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, it's awesome, but to be it looks like either their heads are to big or their legs to short.
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uniquenormality Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
I love Sirius' stance, just so him XP
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:iconchezzitalia:
ChezzItalia Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
SIRIUS HOTNESS MONSTER :heart:
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kittykittyhunter Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011   Writer
XDDD James' pout is HILARIOUS!
And wow, you were right. The conversation suits this picture PERFECTLY. :D
Great job!
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