umm please explain me what's this. was just messing around,and I guess I quite like the result despite the fact she doesn't really look too much like Billie.But FABULOUS hair justt aahhh I couldn't not to draw from the photo anyway,it's better when it's small.. not sure if I'll get the critique,but hope you'll like this somehow.
Whilst I think the shading is good , I feel the impact of the image is lost with the shading . I think her hair should of been a little lighter than it is as it rather blends with the background colours. The shading on the clothing is of an interesting texture and I think it really stands out against the monotone dark colours , though her neck looks a little strange and out of proportion . If you wanted an idea on how to improve it , I would say to work into the drawing a little bit more and leave the background less choppy , I'd also edit her neck a little bit , so she looks a bit more human , If ya know what I mean . Overall good work Viria and keep drawing
You want a critique, I'm here, always here for you ! Well let's say this is great. Some things are wrong about the hair, and the face. It's too messy at the left, and not worked enough. I mean, hair are not that huge, and they have to be more "detailled" but this is still very pleasant to watch. About the face, I think the part hidden by the hair must have been drawn before you get the hair hiding it. About the right part, there's not enough hair in my point of view, maybe because this is how you wanted it to be, but still it makes me think at the first look "is there a part of her skull missing?". Well, the sepia tones are awesome, and the textures are great in anyway, and you still made a wonderful work, but this is not the best in all I've seen from that. Aw, and, I don't totally get what is the real impact of this, if it's not being amazed by your style. This is in anyway a wonderful piece of art, indeed, just need to work your "almost-human-looking" a bit more
Well let's say this is great. Some things are wrong about the hair, and the face. It's too messy at the left, and not worked enough. I mean, hair are not that huge, and they have to be more "detailled" but this is still very pleasant to watch. About the face, I think the part hidden by the hair must have been drawn before you get the hair hiding it.
About the right part, there's not enough hair in my point of view, maybe because this is how you wanted it to be, but still it makes me think at the first look "is there a part of her skull missing?".
Well, the sepia tones are awesome, and the textures are great in anyway, and you still made a wonderful work, but this is not the best in all I've seen from that.
Aw, and, I don't totally get what is the real impact of this, if it's not being amazed by your style.
This is in anyway a wonderful piece of art, indeed, just need to work your "almost-human-looking" a bit more
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